hmmm
I like some of the ideas you have going here, I am not sure the intention you were going for with the percussion but it makes the song feel akward. I think you should have more going on in the higher spectrum to even out all the sub frequencies. The track could be used as some kind of battle or cut scene. I think you should try ading more melody to this and making some slight changes to the percussion track.
neat dance toon
Love the snare used in this track, it stands out and adds depth and suspence to the track. The leads are nice although the bass where i wish more was going on. Nice job!
Ty for the input! I was mostly just playing with some effects, learning the new synths i downloaded, and kinda really liked the beat... but didnt have anywhere to go with it... so a loop it is lol. Ty again, tis appreciated.
Really cool
This sounds like something that could have been used in the castle crashers soundtrack. I love the use of Orchestra hits and the deep choral effects. you definatly gave it an epic feel why also allowing it to breathe inbetween. The arpeggios were a nice touch. I reallt enjoyed this track! I wish it had been longer, I know it is a loop but Great Work!
lol 8 bit love
Love the Ragtime style you got going with this! You the chip tunes sound authentic. The only thing that kept me from 10/10 was the bass was very bland, and while that is a trademark of really old chip tunes, it is not a staple or ragtime. But I did really enjoy the tune!! Great Work!!
Thank you! Yes, there's nothing going on at low frequencies.. ;D
Awesome
I really like this song especially the intro, It sounds like something you would hear in a pop song(in a good way) I love the use of all the different sounds and the rhythm section is strong! Like a lot of the songs on the audio portal it is very short. I do have to say the intro is my favorite part, and that great transition you make where the beat drops out and picks back up. Good Work!
Thanks! I really appreciate the comment! And thanks for the score too! ^^,
Cool Sounds
Nice work on the song, it is a very calming song, could be used as background music somewhere I am sure. Quality is excellent and the transitions are nice. You could have done more with panning to clean up some of the sound, because in some places it is very cluttered. The Drums were kind of boring but in a calming song like this I don't expect any fills. =] Good work mate!
WOW!
very sweet playful melody/chord progression.
Backing instrumentation is very well done, The guitars sound amazing
There was no drumming but the rhythm was done well with the bass notes on the guitars, they were kept steady and on time moving the song forward.
the lack of change ups in the backing instruments were the only thing I didn't like personally but I also feel it is what added a lot of charm to the song,(not everything needs to be progressive) it would be great in a movie/video game somewhere, just had such an innocent loving vibe GREAT WORK!
Thanks a lo for the review and the 10 mate, I appreciate your comments and tips :)
Great Work I know these types of songs are hard
I have also done some rock/metal covers and I know how tough it can be, especially that you remade a really popular song! the Harmonies are really well put together, the guitar tone for rhythm and lead are awesome. Your solos show a lot of skill and they ROCK \m/.
keyboard work was solid
Bass was sounded like it was either missing or too low, my headphones i am using right now have terrible bass respnse though
The drums are the only thing that did not jump out in this song, you did manage to keep them interesting though; other than that amazing work.
Thankyou very much sir! This is great bc it's a review AND a comment!
I really appreciate the review and tips, and glad someone knows how I feel!
Have fixed accordingly =D
DubStep!?
I am normally not a fan of dubstep, but you use it sparingly and I like that. It is not so over powering with the drops and skips and I think that adds to the track and make it better. The build up is cool, I like the drum beat early on it is simple and sounds cool Great work!
interesting
I think this is a pretty good work of music, A few flaws though
1. It is very short
2. The ending is rather quick and abrupt
other than that you have some really cool sounds and chord progressions, the drum beat never switches up but the fact that this is so short, it does not negatively effect the song!
Yeah... the ending could be better. It was intentionally short though... just trying new stuff.
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